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Kyoko-_**
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PostSubject: My Loch Ness Monster   My Loch Ness Monster Icon_minitimeThu Nov 06, 2008 11:08 am

i don't really know why i'm posting this... i wrote this last 2004... i think i just want to remember the times when dad and i aren't in a fight....

comment please.... ^^



11.08.04

Dewdrops on the grass kept my feet wet. I don’t really understand why I went out barefoot this morning. Nevertheless, I didn’t regret that I did. This way, I can feel the earth’s heartbeat.

It is really strange why I woke up so early this morning. But the weirder thing was why did I walk straight out of the house? I walked and walked. I walked towards something I don’t even understand. What is that tune?

My pajamas were soaking wet when I reached a cliff. And the smell of the foggy air kept me under a spell. That melody from his bagpipe embraced me like how I cuddled my pillow. His fancy notes crawled on my arms like ants tickling.

I looked up...

...and saw his familiar face.

My Loch Ness Monster squeezing that inflated bag under his arm, forcing the song to call out its happiness.

The crisp grass turned into a warm blanket and covered my toes. The misty air changed, kissing me warmth on my cheeks as tears tumbled down. Mr. Loch Ness Monster stood leaning on the doorway. With the bagpipe gone, his harmonica greeted me that morning.

“Happy Birthday, Kat!” He hugged me so tight.

“Thanks, Dad.”
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PostSubject: Re: My Loch Ness Monster   My Loch Ness Monster Icon_minitimeThu Nov 06, 2008 6:03 pm

Awwwwwwww. That's so cute.
i love ur use of imagery and symbolisim! great job.
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PostSubject: Re: My Loch Ness Monster   My Loch Ness Monster Icon_minitimeThu Nov 13, 2008 9:20 am

thnx thnx V.... ^^ i'm always good at stuff like this......

i posted another one because our english professor wanted us to write about dying young.... check it out kk? ^^
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